I am nothing and All upon your body
unapologetic, diaphanous nakedness,
spining tightly foreseeing your lips
to the return of night floating in the air
that deepens fugitive inside you
and I’m fallen, annihilated without lies
blurred lightning anxious to have you
when I rush in like a wolf of the Moon
howling serene on your white curves
set into stillness and the prison of your skin
among shades and vertigo, mythical elixir
secret desire guided by your scent
and my eyes sip on the shores of your soul
captives of the abyss, before the beginning
that occurs in the end, while your sigh
into a dream between us, gradually…

Nada soy y Soy todo sobre tu cuerpo
sin arrepentimientos, diáfana desnudez,
girando con fuerza presintiendo tus labios
al retorno de la noche, flotando en el aire
que se ahonda fugitivo dentro de ti.
y soy caído, aniquilado sin mentiras
relámpago confuso ansioso de tenerte
cuando me precipito como lobo de luna
aullando sereno sobre tus curvas blancas
ajustado a la quietud y la prisión de tu piel
entre sombras y vértigo, el elixir mítico
deseo secreto guiado por tu aroma
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In that your recent poems may be read in three different ways, I detect the symbolic significance of the number three. When read, with that in mind, new meanings emerge.
Thank you dear Norm! so far I think I will call this “Threefold Mesh” or “Triple Malla” for spanish, and I will soon post how to construct this for 🙂
Dear Gavriel, perhaps there will be more of these, but this one
is perfectly expressive, and more so, exquisite.
Thanks dear Jay, working to perfect the form, now looking for the right name to it 🙂
[…] – Gradually the night… […]
Brother – It really is fine fine writing Gav – I have only seen someyhing similarly done – but with differences – Like left side a poem right side another – howevr not exacutted as magnifinctly as yor masterful work..
that’s going back Gavriel arounf 1978 – I did 2 way back then, but didn’t have the time not patience what with the site and Daniel – I was extremely wrpped when I saw you had dont it as no one I know at all has attempted this for of poetry- and it is damn fine poetry – My Hats off Broth’ you’ve done it grandly .. lovu mate David – debarnes 11:00pm perth au